The thing that looks off for me is actually the hair. It looks like the hair is drawn as if the person looks forward at the viewer, while the rest of the face points to the right. The facial features are also a bit misplaced vertically, which is why the face looks a little stretched.
- I don't know what do you mean by that.
and his left eye seems to phase through his hair
- It's what I always did in my drawings.